- •Improvised dialog is indicated in parentheses.
- •Interior, reserved train compartment
- •Irresistible charm, I'm too attractive to be let loose.]
- •Interior of railway compartment
- •Interior, further down the corridor
- •Interior of compartment
- •It's all your fault.
- •Interior, dancing club
- •Interior, le circle club
- •Interior, [dress circle lounge] ballroom
- •Interior, theatre dress circle
- •Interior, stage
- •Is furious.
- •Interior, ramp
- •In the dressing room till you do.
- •Interior, backstage theatre corridor
- •Interior, dressing room
- •Interior, corridor on way to dressing room
- •Indicates the girl on the poster.) Alright, Sonny Jim, this is all going
- •Interior, t.V. Studio floor
- •Interior, t.V. Control room
- •Interior, make up room
- •In the uniform of officers in Wellington's army. Together with the boys
- •Interior, t.V. Studio floor
- •Ignored by the girls who don't recognise him. Realising this he goes back
- •Interior, t.V. Control room
- •I get paid for doing something I love doing. (He laughs and with a
- •It was so in the end I wound up giving it all away... But I didn't
- •It for them.]
- •Interior, t.V. Theatre near stage door
- •In the tiled room and out come the rubber hoses [but I'll defy you
- •In the cloth cap while I sort this lot out.
- •Villains.
- •Is entirely empty and no one is even in sight. As he reaches the top of
- •Interior, police station
- •Interior, tv theatre auditorium
- •Interior, studio corridor
I get paid for doing something I love doing. (He laughs and with a
gesture takes in the whole studio.)... all this and a jam butty too!!]
[GIRL: I only enjoy acting for myself. I hate it when other people are
let in.]
[PAUL: Why? I mean, which are you, scared or selfish?]
[GIRL: Why selfish?]
[PAUL: Well, you've got to have people to taste your treacle toffee.]
[She looks at him in surprise.]
[PAUL: No, hang on, I've not gone daft. You see when I was little me
mother let me make some treacle toffee one time in our back scullery.
When I'd done she said to me, "Go and give some to the other kids." So, I
said I would but I thought to meself, "She must think I'm soft." Any
road, I was eating away there but I wanted somebody else to know how good
It was so in the end I wound up giving it all away... But I didn't
mind cos I'd made the stuff in the first place. Well... that's why you
need other people... an audience... to taste your treacle toffee,
like. Eh... does that sound as thickheaded to you as it does to me?]
[GIRL: Not really but I'm probably not a toffee maker. How would you do
those lines of mine?]
[PAUL: Well, look at it this way, I mean, when you come right down to it,
that girl, she's a bit of a scrubber, isn't she?]
[GIRL: Is she?]
{Lester substituted the following sixteen exchanges of dialogue between
Paul and the girl for the previous dialogue.}
[GIRL: I only enjoy acting for myself. I hate it when other people are
let in.]
[PAUL: Why? I mean, which are you, scared or selfish?]
[GIRL: Why selfish?]
[PAUL: Well, doing it for yourself. Aw come off it, you know you're doing
It for them.]
[He indicates people in the street.]
[GIRL: Them?]
[PAUL: Yeah, look when I was a kid in Speke there was this fella - Joe or
something - I can't remember his... he was a dustman, collected bins
and that... well he was always giving kids bikes.]
[GIRL: Bikes?]
[PAUL: Yeah - I know it sounds daft but he did - gave the kids bikes,
scruffy thing he was, but he'd buy these old bikes do 'em up and give
them away; all the kids were mad about him. Never gave me one but that
was alright. He was always giving spare kids a bike. Well you could be
like that. Eh, look at that fella (he points to street) down there. If
you share out your acting with him you could make his day.]
[GIRL: Could I?]
[PAUL: Of course you could, stands to reason.]
[GIRL: Oh, I don't know.]
[PAUL: Nobody does till they try.]
[GIRL: Alright, how would you do those lines of mine.]
[PAUL: Well, look at it this way, I mean, when you come right down to it,
that girl, she's a bit of a scrubber isn't she?]
[GIRL: Is she?]
[PAUL: Of course... Look, if she was a Liverpool scrubber... (PAUL
starts acting a Liverpool girl; he minces about then turns, extending his
leg.) Eh, fella, you want to try pulling the other one, it's got a full
set of bells hanging off it. Y'what?... know your sort, two cokes and
a packet of cheese and onion crisps and suddenly it's love and we're
stopping in an empty shop doorway. You're just after me body and y'can't
have it... so there!]
[GIRL: (shattered) And you honestly think that's what she meant?]
[PAUL: Oh, definitely, it sticks out a mile, she's trying to get him to
marry her but he doesn't want... well... I don't reckon any fella's
ever wanted to get married. But girls are like that, clever and cunning.
You've got to laugh. (He laughs.)]
[GIRL: Well, it's nice to know you think we're clever.]
[PAUL: (grinning) And cunning.]
[GIRL: And what do you do about it?]
[PAUL: Me? Oh, I don't have the time, I'm always running about with the
lads... no, we don't have the time.]
[GIRL: Pity.]
[PAUL: (not noticing the invitation) Aye, it is but as long as you get
by, it's alright, you know... bash on, happy valley's when they let
you stop. Anyroad, I'd better get back.]
[GIRL: Yes.]
[PAUL: (going) See you.]
[GIRL: Of course.]
[PAUL stands at the doorway, shrugs then goes out.]