- •Understanding Why Communication Matters
- •Communicating as a Professional
- •Exploring the Communication Process
- •Committing to Ethical Communication
- •Communicating in a World of Diversity
- •Using Technology to Improve Business Communication
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Understanding the Three-Step Writing Process
- •Analyzing the Situation
- •Gathering Information
- •Selecting the Right Medium
- •Organizing Your Message
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Adapting to Your Audience: Building Strong Relationships
- •Adapting to Your Audience: Controlling Your Style and Tone
- •Composing Your Message: Choosing Powerful Words
- •Composing Your Message: Creating Effective Sentences
- •Composing Your Message: Crafting Coherent Paragraphs
- •Using Technology to Compose and Shape Your Messages
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Revising Your Message: Evaluating the First Draft
- •Revising to Improve Readability
- •Editing for Clarity and Conciseness
- •Using Technology to Revise Your Message
- •Producing Your Message
- •Proofreading Your Message
- •Distributing Your Message
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Electronic Media for Business Communication
- •Social Networks
- •Information and Media Sharing Sites
- •Instant Messaging and Text Messaging
- •Blogging
- •Podcasting
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Strategy for Routine Requests
- •Common Examples of Routine Requests
- •Strategy for Routine Replies and Positive Messages
- •Common Examples of Routine Replies and Positive Messages
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Using the Three-Step Writing Process for Negative Messages
- •Using the Direct Approach for Negative Messages
- •Using the Indirect Approach for Negative Messages
- •Sending Negative Messages on Routine Business Matters
- •Sending Negative Employment Messages
- •Sending Negative Organizational News
- •Responding to Negative Information in a Social Media Environment
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Using the Three-Step Writing Process for Persuasive Messages
- •Developing Persuasive Business Messages
- •Common Examples of Persuasive Business Messages
- •Developing Marketing and Sales Messages
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Applying the Three-Step Writing Process to Reports and Proposals
- •Supporting Your Messages with Reliable Information
- •Conducting Secondary Research
- •Conducting Primary Research
- •Planning Informational Reports
- •Planning Analytical Reports
- •Planning Proposals
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Writing Reports and Proposals
- •Writing for Websites and Wikis
- •Illustrating Your Reports with Effective Visuals
- •Completing Reports and Proposals
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Finding the Ideal Opportunity in Today’s Job Market
- •Planning Your Résumé
- •Writing Your Résumé
- •Completing Your Résumé
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Submitting Your Résumé
- •Understanding the Interviewing Process
- •Preparing for a Job Interview
- •Interviewing for Success
- •Following Up After an Interview
- •Chapter Review and Activities
- •Test Your Knowledge
- •Apply Your Knowledge
- •Practice Your Skills
- •Expand Your Skills
- •References
- •Index
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The colleagues communicate in a style
that is concise and conversational but still professional.
Even in a fast, informal medium such as IM, Delong quickly reviews her message before sending it each time.
Figure 6.6 Instant Messaging for Business Communication
Instant messaging is widely used in business, but you should not use the same informal style of communication you probably use for IM with your friends and family.
System provides position and contact information and a photo of the person on the other end, which helps to personalize this purely electronic communication.
System provides simple formatting tools and a spell checker.
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■Unless a meeting is scheduled or you’re expected to be available for other reasons, make yourself unavailable when you need to focus on other work.
■If you’re not on a secure system, don’t send confidential information using IM.
■Be extremely careful about sending personal messages—they have a tendency to pop up on other people’s computers at embarrassing moments.
■Don’t use IM for important but impromptu meetings if you can’t verify that everyone concerned will be available.
■Don’t use IM for lengthy, complex messages; email is better for those.
■Try to avoid carrying on multiple IM conversations at one time, to minimize the chance of sending messages to the wrong people or making one person wait while you tend to another conversation.
■Follow all security guidelines designed to keep your company’s information and systems safe from attack.
For the latest information on using IM in business, visit http://real-timeupdates.com/bce6 and click on Chapter 6.
Blogging
Blogs, online journals that are easier to personalize and update than conventional websites, have become a major force in business communication. Millions of business-oriented blogs are now in operation, and blogs have become an important source of information for
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consumers and professionals alike.45 Good business blogs and microblogs pay close attention to several important elements:
■Communicating with personal style and an authentic voice. Most business messages designed for large audiences are carefully scripted and written in a “corporate voice” that is impersonal and objective. In contrast, successful business blogs are written by individuals and exhibit their personal style. Audiences relate to this fresh approach and often build closer emotional bonds with the blogger’s organization as a result.
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Describe the use of blogging and microblogging in business communication, and briefly explain how to adapt the threestep process to blogging.
■Delivering new information quickly. Blogging tools let you post new material as soon as you create it or find it. This feature not only allows you to respond quickly when needed—such as during a corporate crisis—but also lets your audiences know that active communication is taking place. Blogs that don’t offer a continuous stream of new and interesting content are quickly ignored in today’s online environment.
Writing in a personal, authentic voice is key to attracting and keeping blog readers.
■Choosing topics of peak interest to audiences. Successful blogs cover topics that readers care about.
■Encouraging audiences to join the conversation. Not all blogs invite comments, although most do, and many bloggers consider comments to be an essential feature. Blog comments can be a valuable source of news, information, and insights. In addition, the informal nature of blogging seems to make it easier for companies to let their guard down and converse with their audiences. To protect against comments that are not helpful or appropriate, many bloggers review all comments and post only the most helpful or interesting ones.
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Understanding the Business Applications of Blogging
Blogs are a potential solution whenever you have a continuing stream of information to share with an online audience—and particularly when you want the audience to have the opportunity to respond. Here are some of the many ways businesses are using blogs for internal and external communication:46
■Anchoring the social media presence. As noted on page 137, the multiple threads of any social media program should be anchored in a central hub the company or individual owns and control. Blogs make an ideal social media hub.
■Project management and team communication. Using blogs is a good way to keep project teams up to date, particularly when team members are geographically dispersed.
■Company news. Companies can use blogs to keep employees informed about general business matters, from facility news to benefit updates. Blogs also serve as online community forums, giving everyone in the company a chance to raise questions and voice concerns.
■Customer support. Building on the tradition of online customer support forums that have been around since the earliest days of the Internet, customer support blogs answer questions, offer tips and advice, and inform customers about new products. Also, many
companies monitor the blogosphere (and Twitter), looking for complaints and responding with offers to help dissatisfied customers.47
■Public relations and media relations. Many company employees and executives now share company news with both the general public and journalists via their blogs.
■Recruiting. Using a blog is a great way to let potential employees know more about your company, the people who work there, and the nature of the company culture. In the other direction, employers often find and evaluate the blogs and microblogs of prospective employees, making blogging is a great way to build a name for yourself within your industry or profession.
■Policy and issue discussions. Executive blogs in particular provide a public forum for discussing legislation, regulations, and other broad issues of interest to an organization.
The business applications of blogs include a wide range of internal and external communication tasks.
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Blogs are an ideal medium for word-of-mouth marketing, the spread
of promotional messages from one audience member to another.
■Crisis communication. Using blogs is a convenient way to provide up-to-the-minute information during emergencies, correct misinformation, or respond to rumors.
■Market research. Blogs can be a clever mechanism for soliciting feedback from customers and experts in the marketplace. In addition to using their own blogs to solicit feedback, today’s companies should monitor blogs that are likely to discuss them, their executives, and their products.
■Brainstorming. Online brainstorming via blogs offers a way for people to toss around ideas and build on each other’s contributions.
■Employee engagement. Blogs can enhance communication across all levels of a company. For example, as part of a program to align its corporate culture with changes in
the global beverage market, Coca-Cola solicited feedback via blog comments from more than 20,000 employees.48
■Customer education. Blogs are a great way to help current and potential customers understand and use your products and services. This function can improve sales and support productivity as well, by reducing the need for one-on-one communication.
■Word-of-mouth marketing. Bloggers often make a point of providing links to other blogs and websites that interest them, giving marketers a great opportunity to have their messages spread by enthusiasts. (Online word-of mouth marketing is often called viral marketing in reference to the way biological viruses are transmitted from person to per-
son. However, viral marketing is not really an accurate metaphor. As author Brian Solis puts it, “There is no such thing as viral marketing.”49 Real viruses spread from host to host on their own, whereas word-of-mouth marketing spreads voluntarily from person to person. The distinction is critical, because you need to give people a good reason— good content, in other words—to pass along your message.)
■Influencing traditional media news coverage. According to social media consultant Tamar Weinberg, “the more prolific bloggers who provide valuable and consistent con-
tent are often considered experts in their subject matter” and are often called upon when journalists need insights into various topics.50
■Community building. Blogging is a great way to connect people with similar interests, and popular bloggers often attract a community of readers who connect with one another through the commenting function.
The uses of blogs are limited only by your creativity, so be on the lookout for new ways you can use them to foster positive relationships with colleagues, customers, and other important audiences (see Figure 6.7).
Before you launch a blog, make sure you have a clear understanding of your target audience, the purpose of your blog, and the scope of subjects you plan to cover.
Adapting the Three-Step Process for Successful Blogging
The three-step writing process is easy to adapt to blogging tasks. The planning step is particularly important when you’re launching a blog because you’re planning an entire communication channel, not just a single message. Pay close attention to your audience, your purpose, and your scope:
■Audience. Except with team blogs and other efforts that have an obvious and well-de- fined audience, defining the target audience for a blog can be challenging. You want an audience large enough to justify the time you’ll be investing but narrow enough that you can provide a clear focus for the blog. For instance, if you work for a firm that develops computer games, would you focus your blog on “hardcore” players, the types who spend thousands of dollars on super-fast PCs optimized for video games, or would you broaden the reach to include all video gamers? The decision often comes down to business strategy.
■Purpose. A business blog needs to have a business-related purpose that is important to your company and to your chosen audience. Moreover, the purpose has to “have legs”—that is, it needs to be something that can drive the blog’s content for months or years—rather than focus on a single event or an issue of only temporary interest. For instance, if you’re a technical expert, you might create a blog to give the audience tips and techniques for using your company’s products more effectively—a never-ending subject that’s important to both you and your audience. This would be the general purpose of
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Convenient action buttons for printing
and social sharing are located directly below the post title.
The clean text layout features ragged-right paragraphs and
generous leading to accommodate
the sans serif typeface.
The comment box makes it easy for
readers to respond and participate in a conversation about the post topic.
Figure 6.7 Elements of an Effective Business Blog
This Xerox blog, featuring a post by company executive Will Saunders, illustrates the features that make an effective, reader-friendly company blog.
Source: Copyright © 2012 by Xerox Corporation. Reprinted with permission.
your blog; each posting would have a specific purpose within the context of that general purpose. Finally, if you are not writing an official company blog but rather blogging as an individual employee, make sure you understand your employer’s blogging guidelines. IBM, for example, gives its employees 12 specific social computing guidelines, such as identifying their role as IBM employees if they are discussing matters related to the company and respecting intellectual property laws.51
■Scope. Defining the scope of your blog can be a bit tricky. You want to cover a subject area that is broad enough to offer discussion possibilities for months or years but narrow enough to have an identifiable focus.
A search box in a prominent location helps readers who are looking for other topics on the Xerox blog.
“About this blog” gives new visitors an immediate idea of how this blog might be of interest to them, without
forcing them to read multiple posts to see what the
blog is about.
RSS and email subscription options let readers sign up for automated delivery
of future posts.
The “Unsubscribe” option is placed in a prominent location as well, minimizing the work for subscribers who have changed their minds.
The blogroll offers links to other blogs that might be of interest to readers who find this blog helpful.
The categories listing (which continues below) is a quick way for readers to find all
the posts on a particular topic.
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Write blog postings in a comfort- able—but not careless—style.
After you begin writing your blog, careful planning needs to continue with each message. Unless you’re posting to a re- stricted-access blog, such as an internal blog on a company intranet, you can never be sure who might see your posts. Other bloggers might link to them months or years later.
Use a comfortable, personal writing style. Blog audiences don’t want to hear from your company; they want to hear from you. Bear in mind, though, that comfortable does not mean careless. Sloppy writing damages your credibility. Successful blog content also needs to be interesting, valuable to readers, and as brief as possible.52 In addition, although audiences expect you to be knowledgeable in the subject area your blog covers, you don’t need to know everything about a
topic. If you don’t have all the information yourself, provide links to other blogs and websites that supply relevant information. In fact, media curation (see page 140) is one of the most valuable aspects of blogging. Just be sure the content you share is relevant to your readers and compatible with your communication goals.
Completing messages for your blog is usually quite easy. Evaluate the content and readability of your message, proofread to correct any errors, and post using your blogging system’s tools. If you’re using any contemporary blogging system, it should offer a newsfeed option (RSS or Atom) so that your audience can automatically receive headlines and summaries of new blog posts.
Finally, make your material easier to find by tagging it with descriptive words. Your readers can then click on these “content labels” to find additional posts on those topics. Tags are usually displayed with each post, and they can also be groups in a tag cloud display, which shows all the tags in use on your blog.
Table 6.2 summarizes a number of suggestions for successful blogging. For the latest information on using blogs in business, visit http://real-timeupdates.com/bce6 and click on Chapter 6.
Microblogging
A microblog is a variation on blogging in which messages are sharply restricted to specific character counts. Twitter (http://twitter.com) is the best known of these systems, but many others exist. Some companies have private microblogging systems for internal use only; these systems are sometimes referred to as enterprise microblogging or internal micromessaging.53
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TABLE 6.2 Tips for Effective Business Blogging
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Don’t blog without a clear plan. |
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Make it about your audience and the issues that are |
Readers want to know how your blog will help them, entertain them, or give |
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Flogs, or fake blogs, violate the spirit of blogging, show disrespect for your |
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If you review products on your blog, disclose any beneficial relationships you have with the companies that make those products.
Bloggers who receive free products or other compensation from companies whose products they write about are now required to disclose the nature of these relationships.
of forwarding messages from other Twitter users, is the microblogging equivalent of sharing other content from other bloggers via media curation.
In addition to its usefulness as a standalone system, Twitter is also integrated with other social media systems and a variety of publishing and reading tools and services. Many of these system use the informal Twitter feature known as the hashtag (the # symbol followed by a word or phrase), which makes it easy for people to label and search for topics of interest and to monitor ongoing Twitter conversations about particular topics.
Although microblogs are designed to encourage spontaneous communication, when you’re using the medium for business communication, don’t just tweet out whatever pops into your head. Make sure messages are part of your overall communication strategy. Twitter
Don’t let the speed and simplicity of microblogging lull you into making careless mistakes; every message should support your business communication objectives.